The Surprise in the Darkness

This week’s Story Starter teaser is:

I heard a voice calling out my name from inside the house, and when I opened the door…

my hand navigated the darkness to find the light switch on the wall. I recognized the voice beckoning my attention, but I was oblivious to why my daughter was sitting in the house at night in the dark. The usual when I got home from work was loud televisions with every light in the house on, so my nerves were on high alert. I did not know what I would meet when the lights shined into the room. Would it be good, or would there be something sinister lying in wait for me to walk in the door?

As I flipped on the light, the loudness of cheers and singing delightfully surprised me.

“SURPRISE!!!”

I saw many faces I knew and had not seen in ages it seemed. Tears of happiness filled my eyes with the sound of joy and celebration in the room which now was filled with light. I was fond of many of the people that made it to my home on this special day.

My daughter had invited everyone over to celebrate my 45th birthday, and I could not have been happier than I was at that very moment.


This was written for Fandango’s Story Starter #17 and Pensitivity101’s Three Things Challenge #763, and I used the word challenge (hand) from the Daily Spur.

xoxo, E.M.

6 thoughts on “The Surprise in the Darkness

  1. This is lovely. How wonderful for you.
    Reminds me of the surprise party I did for my parents 35th wedding anniversary. They were expecting a standard roast dinner but instead there was a buffet complete with bubbly and an anniversary cake and 37 guests…………. they all came out of my kitchen and it was the only time I’d seen my dad lost for words. Mum was crying quietly with happiness. It was a wonderful day for everyone, especially them.

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